Please review a website build by totally newbe

gk_awadhiya · #1 (**permalink**) 06-20-2006, 07:36 PM

I have no any programming base. Whatever I learned is from free tutorials and forums like this one. So after learning from tutorials and forums I started to build my website which is still under construction and several pages are to be aded (actually it has only few pages). Still I would like to know your views about my website. Please belive that your comments, advices and guidance are very much valuable for me.

The link for my website is the first link in my signature i.e. agoodplace4all.com

Thanks in advance.

GK Awadhiya.

jitender · #2 (**permalink**) 06-22-2006, 10:27 AM

Hi there,

i think you are on very beginning point.

Add some design also, insted of adding site text effect.

Right menu try different color.

regards
jitender

cashews · #3 (**permalink**) 06-22-2006, 10:44 AM

I think you need to have one strong place for the navigation, whereas right now its is duplicated on both sides of the page. A clear simple navigation is less likely to confuse the visitor.

gk_awadhiya · #4 (**permalink**) 06-22-2006, 11:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jitender

Hi there,

i think you are on very beginning point.

Add some design also, instead of adding site text effect.

Right menu try different color.

regards
jitender

Yes Jitender, you are correct (I am on very beginning point). Even I have to search for codes. This is my first effort and I will never give-up (though my first website may be ugly but I will go on to improve it).

Certainly I will do according to your suggestion. Your reply is great encouragement for me and I thank you for it.

cashews · #5 (**permalink**) 06-22-2006, 11:55 AM

Good luck - I like your determination

webhostingrebates · #6 (**permalink**) 06-22-2006, 03:03 PM

Nice start for a newbie site. I have a couple of suggestions to improve your layout.

1) Get rid of the right column with the pink buttons - just keep the text links over on the left column.

2) Remove the extraneous <html> and <header> code from within your table. I assume that these were mistakenly inserted.

3) Incorporate the adsense adds into the text and move the images or remove them (This will give you high CTRs.)

Overall good start.

gk_awadhiya · #7 (**permalink**) 06-24-2006, 10:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by webhostingrebates

Nice start for a newbie site. I have a couple of suggestions to improve your layout.

1) Get rid of the right column with the pink buttons - just keep the text links over on the left column.

2) Remove the extraneous <html> and <header> code from within your table. I assume that these were mistakenly inserted.

3) Incorporate the adsense adds into the text and move the images or remove them (This will give you high CTRs.)

Overall good start.

Thanks much for your suggestions. I am really feeling encouraged. I will make changes shortly as per your suggestions.

GK Awadhiya

Kirtan · #8 (**permalink**) 09-29-2006, 03:02 AM

Hi Desi,
I don't know hindi. i think desi means indian. well. add some graphics to your site. atleast lines to distingush parts of your site like head, menu, content, etc.
Need some padding betwenn content and images. Also Hindi content looks good in IE but not in Firefox.
best of luck

missile · #9 (**permalink**) 10-07-2006, 05:12 AM

a good work by a designer..
keep it up..
All the best..

Regards,
Missile

blogmaster · #10 (**permalink**) 10-22-2006, 12:44 PM

Gr8 start. I suggest you try javascript navigation menus too. They can enhance your site. You can download the scripts free too

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